Monday 7 March 2016

Writing



WALT interview a member of our class and use the information to complete a short profile of them

Hola


Hola is 9 years old and lives in Manurewa. Hola lives with her 3 sisters and 4 brothers. In her spare time she loves to play with her younger siblings. Inside her family she looks up to her older sister Kalesita because she looks after her. When she goes to school her favourite subjects are reading and spelling. During recess she likes to play basketball. She wants to become a teacher when she is older just like her favourite teacher, Whaea Nicky. She fears teachers because they make her cry. Hola admires Megan Trainor in Walk of Shame, but her favourite song is ‘Work’ by Rihanna. Her favourite shop is Kmart because of their astonishing deals. Her favourite movie is Diary of a wimpy kid. Her favourite colour is blue because of the ocean. She likes to go K.F.C and eat their scrumptious chicken. Her favourite hero is Hulk because he is strong. She adores John Cena because she think he’s always the champion. She plays touch with her brothers in her backyard, it is her favourite game.


By Daisy (Year 5).
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7 comments:

  1. Miss Manuele13 March 2016 at 22:23

    Hi Daisy,
    You sure have captured some important information about Hola. My favourite colour is blue too and I have to agree with Hola that K-Mart sure has some great deals. Whaea Nicky is an awesome teacher...you know, not all teachers are scary!

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  2. Anonymous21 March 2016 at 14:02

    hi daisy,
    that was a great description about Hola's life i really like how you knew how to discribe it.
    by
    Sarah Rm8

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  3. Anonymous21 March 2016 at 14:10

    Hi Daisy I really enjoyed this so much It looks like you found out a lot
    about Hola. Guage & Kupa room8.

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  4. Anonymous21 March 2016 at 14:14

    I like how you described Hola and how you put each thing she liked in order. Maybe you should add more punctuation. but good work! :)
    By Alistair

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  5. Anonymous21 March 2016 at 14:22

    hi dasiy,
    i loved how you used lots of really good detail to describe hola in your story and how you asked her really good information about herself

    by laquinda
    room 8

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  6. Anonymous21 March 2016 at 14:32

    Hi Daisy,you have some amazing information maybe you need to work on your puncuations

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  7. Anonymous30 March 2016 at 21:34

    Hi Daisy
    You did some great work about hola you must
    Know everything about her now keep up the good work
    By Jahnia RM 8

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